Cutey Claycia

Hi! I am from ProjectComment and I am here to review this piece to the best of my caliber!

The interesting bit about this piece, as stated by the lovely below, is the colours are consistent with each other. The character (Claycia, from a Kirby game I believe..? I googled it just now ) seems to be "cute" as per the title.

The  lineart is a tad wonky, and ruins the mood of this piece. I suggest you use one consistent colour for the lineart, OR the correspondent colour of the subject you are outlining, instead of black at a few place and colour at some.

While you made a very good attempt with the hands, they look off. Moreover, the lighting mixed with blur doesn't seem to sit well with the character in my opinion. The hair could be a bit more consistent instead of looking like a blob on Claycia's head.

I nearly forgot to mention, but the character's pose is slightly off model..I guess? I don't have any idea about this character, so I could be wrong.

In a summary, the things you need to work on are:

1. The lineart

2. Shading and lighting

3. Overall shape of the character

4. Posture

This is a really cute and colourful piece! I look forward to seeing you improve!